Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Chapter 1

So guys i like run out of ideas fast when it comes to this so i have decided to Delete Twisted love, keep Endless love and Write this one. Twisted love is basically just like every other Onikafaree story i have already read. This one is gonna be something different i promise just trust me i got yall . . .

The sun shined bright in Safarees room, so bright that it woke him up out of his sleep. Rubbing his eyes he got out of bed and headed straight to the bathroom to relieve himself . He used it, brushed his teeth and hopped in the shower. Not even 12 minutes in the shower his little sister Shawna was banging on the door.

"Safareee Hurry up other people have to get ready too." Shawna yelled.

Safaree ignored her, he washed hisself off and stepped out the shower. He wrapped a towel around his waist and left out the bathroom.

As soon as he walked out Shawna ran passed him. This was a everyday thing in the morning.

Safaree went to his room and shut the door. He grabbed some boxers from out his dresser. Got some Khaki Cargoes and a Red , black, and White Polo with his red black and white Jordans and got ready for another long day at school.

Safaree was a tall, Darkskin, muscular boy with dark brown eyes and deep waves. He was 18 and in the 11 grade. Safaree was the quiet type, He kept to himself and because of that all the boys in the 11 & 12 grade picked on him. Even the one person he thought was his boy turned on him once they got to highschool. His name was Vince , him and Vince was boys since first grade and just like that Vince became his worst enemy. Everyone at school loved Vince because he was Quarterback for they football team, and just like Vince everyone looked down on Safaree except this one girl and her friends. Her name was Onika Maraj. Safaree secretly had a crush on Onika. She was everything to him. Beautiful face, Perfect body, Amazing personality. Every nigga wanted to be with her. Every female wanted to be her. She was head cheerleader, volleyball player, and she played Softball. Onika was a sweetheart she never looked down on anyone. Whenever Vince and his crew picked with anybody she always went off on them. Safaree didn't understand why everybody treated him like shit.

Safaree didnt notice he spent ten minutes thinkinh, he hurried and grabbed his work clothes and put it in his booksack and went to see if Shawna and Sarah was ready.

"Aye lets go" Safaree yelled making his way down stairs.

"Goodmorning baby" Mama Samuels said kissing Safaree's cheek.

"Morning Ma" Safaree grabbed a apple and made his way out the door.

"See you tonight ma love u" He left and got into the car waiting for his sisters.

Ten minutes passed and they still wasnt out. He blew the horn for the fifth time before they made it out.

"Thanks for rushing us" Sarah spat.
"Your welcome" Safaree smirked and pulled off.

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Safaree dropped Sarah off at the front of the school and pulled into the back to park. Him and Shawna got out and went they separate ways.

As he made his way to his locker he felt two hands pushing him to the ground. He looked up to Vince, Mike, Tyler, and Jaylen laughing. He was tired of being pushed around by people he know was some pussy ass niggas. He got up and shook his head. Picking up his bag he started to walk off until he heard a female voice yelling.

"What the fuck is wrong with you assholes? All y'all do is pick with that boy for no reason. What have he done to y'all, not shit right? One day he gone pop off on one of you niggas and ima be right there laughing." Onika said shaking her head.

"Chill Nic this has nothing to do with you." Mike said.

" Yeah and plus I know Safaree he might be muscular but that nigga a pussy. That nigga aint about that life. Vince said dapping Tyler off.

"And if he try.."

"And if he try what? Yall niggas all talk. I only ignore you niggas because i don't wanna get kicked out of school but keep on and ima show you punk ass niggas what im about." Safaree spat.

"Oh this nigga grew balls because Onika is right here i see . Nigga you the one all talk." Vince said.

"Says who? the nigga that pissed on hisself since the 8th grade? ." Safaree said.

All Vince boys started laughing

"I thought we was boys but you changed when we got to highschool. Its cool doe just know im no longer taking shit from you playboy.

Safaree started walking away when he felt two little hands stop him.

"Safaree right?" Onika smiled.

"Uhh yeah umm Onika right?"

"Yes " Onika blushed.

"Thnks for you know taking up for me . You didnt have to Onika." Safaree looked down.

"Its okay if you call me Nic, Nicki, or Nika like everyone else Faree".

The way she said Faree did something to him. He looked into her beautiful eyes and instantly got lost into them.

They stood there and just looked into each others eyes.

The stare lasted for a least 5 minutes until the first bell rung.

"Nice meeting you Faree, hope we get to talk soon". Nic walked away smiling from ear to ear.

"Nice meeting u too Nic" Safaree smiled heading to his first class.

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ONIKA

"Nic girl whats up i been calling yo name for a while." Nickis best friend Lauren said frowning.

"Nothing Lauren i was just ..... thinking"

"About?" Candi said walking up.

"Probably about that loser Safaree" Vince said walking behind Candi holding her waist .

"Vince shut the fuck up who was talking to you?" Nicki rolled her eyes. 
"Nicki I know your not feeling that Safaree kid. You know be not your type." Lauren said.

"Mind y'all buisness. Maybe i do like him. He's cute, he have a fine ass body, and he is mad sweet and anyways how do yall know what my type is." Nicki said getting pissed each minute.

"You forgot to add he is mad pussy" Tyler said as Vince and his crew laughed.

"He wasnt pussy when he put ALL yall in your place just a few minutes ago now was he? No what all yall doing is pissing me off just shut up and mind yall business. I aint go time for this" Nicki got up and walked out the gym. She wished her teacher wasnt out sick cause for the next two periods she had nowhere to go and sitting in the gym listening to them belittle Safaree was not a option .

Walking into the Library she spotted her best friend TT reading a book. She was walking towards her when she also spotted Safaree sitting my himself. She went to TT and told her she was gonna be right back. Then she left and went sit by Safaree.

As soon as he looked up and Saw Onika he smiled.

"Hey Faree"

"Hey Nic"

"Why isnt you in class?"

"Bc I'll rather be here talking to you"

"Oh word? Thats whats up"

"I thought you would be like the shy type"

"Well you thought wrong. I just keep to myself thats it"

"I like that. Your different Safaree, in a good way doe. When i look in your eyes its like i could read you."

"Your different to. Not like all these other girls around here. Your personality is what makes me like you besides your beautiful face."

"SO you do like me?" Onika blushed.

"Yes actually i do." Safaree smiled.

"Well Faree i like you to" Onika smiled showing them deep dimples.

"you should call me tonight" Nicki grabbed Safarees hand and wrote her number on it with her pink pen."

Safaree was all smiles.

Nicki got up and kissed Safaree on the cheek. Then she said bye and went to sit by TT.

"Hey sis whats up" Nic asked TT.

"Nothing trying to study for this history test.

"Oh okay. What you doing after practice today?"

"Nothing i guess ima just go home."

"Well do u wanna come to my house everyone is gonna be gone and i dont wanna be there be myself." Onika pouted.

"Sure Nika ima be there."

"Thanks TT."

"So whats going on with you and Safaree?"

"You know him? How?"

"I take almost every class with him. He real cool Nika, And he fine as hell with them sexy juicy lips"

"Okay bitch hop off my man" Nicki said.

"Oh so he your man Onika?"

"No .. well .. umm"

"Cat got your tongue" Safaree said in Nic's ear.

Nic heart dropped in her stomach.

"Whats up TT " Safaree gave her a hug.

"Hey SB" me and Nicki was just talking about you"

"Yeah i know i heard everything" Safaree looked at Nicki and smiled she was blushing hard.

"My sister needs me so ima talk to you later TT and ima call you tonight Nic." Safaree hugged them both and left.

"Why u didnt tell me he was behind me" Nicki rolled her eyes.

"Sorry" TT laughed, to her Onika face was priceless.

"Hmmhm let me get to my class, see u at practice"

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Safaree Safaree picked Shawna up from the Hospital. He was worried when his sister called him crying.

"Whats wrong Shawna." Safaree looked at her as she got in the car."

"Safaree im pregnant"

"What the fuck you mean your pregnant?" Safaree was pissed.

"Safaree please calm down" Shawna started crying again.

"You want me to calm down? Your Just fucking 16 Shawna what the fuck you gonna do with a baby?

"Safaree u act like Grandmother didnt leave us all that money when she passed.

"Actually she left yall all her money. She left me a bible remember? And she said she left yall that for college so try again."

"Well you know the million of dollars thats missing from her. What if i find it?"

"You sound stupid. Do u ever think Shawna?"

"Yes I do"

"Who is the father?"

"Safaree not right now"

"Who is the Father Shawna?"

"The father is ...."

TBC....

So you guys here it i tell me if i should continue . Sorry is there are errors i am doing this on my phone. ENJOY - babydoll <3

9 comments:

  1. I Told Yo Ass To Reread n Awllat But You Said That There Weren't Any Errors, The Devil Is A Lie. But Anywaysssss, Loved The Chapter, You're Off To A Good Start,It is Different.Yassss For Nic Always Standing Up For Faree Then Him Actually Standing up Himself, They Cute. Lmfaooo Dead at TT Not Tellin Nic He Was Standing Right Behind, I Bet The Look On Her Face When He Was Like Cat Got Your Tongue Was Priceless Lollll. Keep Up The Good Work & Typos At A Minimum. Post Soon-@YoAmoOnika

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  2. Please continue this. I liked it.

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  3. i love that it is a different storyline. CONTINUE!

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  4. YES!! Thank you for this story line. Not only are they not famous but the roles are opposie and it's not Nicki being the underdog and she's sort of "saving" him. I love it already, Post soon.

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  5. P.S. Vincents the father, isnt he?

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  6. I love thisssss. Vince is the father aintit

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  7. OMG I love this please please please.continue this!

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